Saturday, August 20, 2016

My Writing Skills

     When it comes to writing I don't think I have the skills. I could be abysmal in writing. A major error would be word choice. Word choice is to clarify and expand the ideas, and me personally I have simple ideas and details which makes a simple paper. Now that I'm in AP English my word choice should amenity. One way I could amenity my word choice is to do more brainstorming and taking my time to get my ideas down. Sometime I can't think of any topics or ideas for my paper. Another error would be spelling. I'm not abysmal at spelling but I tend to struggle at spelling. I would love to increase my word choice, but the spelling gives me a problem. My major oversight to writing is brainstorming supporting details for my topics. It really aggravate me when I can't think of good details. One way I could alleviate this problem is by paying attention and taking notes. On the other hand, I'm dominant at voice and sentence fluency and voice. Once I determine my main topic sentence the other sentences flow very well. This year would be a progressing year for me in writing and in other obstacles. I already improved in my studying and my grammar. I am looking forward for my English teacher Mr. Rease, to help assuage my errors and obstacles in writing.

Sunday, August 14, 2016

I Am Jaylin M. Lucas

Hello everyone. My name is Jaylin Lucas and I attend Ben C. Rain High school. I am a intellectual Junior this year that takes all A P classes and A P English eleven and Chemistry A P are the focus of this semester. I have two brothers, Li'Jordan & Jacobie and I am the middle child on my mother side and also the only female. On my father side I am the baby girl. For fun I love playing volleyball, going to work, dancing, listening to music,  hanging out with friends and family, and helping children. I love helping out children and planning on going to college for medical a degree so that I can pursue my dream of becoming an pediatrician. Every year I like to challenge myself. My challenges and expectations is to ameliorate my G. P. A from a 3.5 to a 4.0. Another challenge is reading and writing because they are my weaknesses. Well, I know my teacher Mr. Rease would help improve my literature and writing skills. My supreme goal in high school is to graduate top ten in my class and also with and honors degree. my Next step after high school would be to attend The University Of Alabama at Birmingham for Medical. Being an honors student is the best decision I could make. My classes may be laborious but its worth it and  a big step in opening the doors for college and pursuing my dreams.
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